the way you posted it deph was all messed like the Line in it n shit confused me where shit was n shit but i read it n shit the verses were good yo check it

DollaBill
ight the defenitions you gave were rich and very good the emotion was ighh the flow was great but you really lacked stucture not on the whole verse but a lil bit of it, it was all ight but just lacked there some good vocab the imagery was there i was feeling your part just to let you know

Indeph homie
ighh that was tighh very good stucture and a great flow some nice vocab and some great wording and grammer very good imagery and the creativty was there the pace of the multi was there, i felt yours alot too alot different styles here tho but that was tight

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