Thread: *Love Note*[~Lisa Anne~]
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Old 02-09-05, 10:57 PM   #2
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Alright, Emotion is there. Upp your imaginary.....Describe how fine she is....Upp your vocab....good flow.........Creativity needs some elevation too


Overall good drop 7/10
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