Voted For: final

Aiight look. Final got this battle, Copywright, your shit was ok but I think that you were relying on vocab WAY too much.. Verses sort of get annoying when people just try to fit in as much vocab as they can..

Final your getting better man, but I think you should look at using different perspectives in your topicals, like what I've seen from you is mainly rambling on about describing feelings.. Try and use some perspectives like telling a story from an on-looker and shit like that.. But always try and teach people things with your verses.. Thats what wins topicals..

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RIP jono, peace out bboy.
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