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Old 02-10-05, 02:43 AM   #12
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Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

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everyone knows you not a playa..you a bigger, fake pun
Your battle "threads" are dead,so I know where "throwback" came from.
5/10..ok opener..this could have been worded better

your clothes,don't get a B,C, or D,I seen better dressed referes..
and you wonder why your style,graded with a letter E?
6/10 Nice Personal

All of E style Get killed...its over,you now hear the whistle blow
gotasswhoopin..gonna get killed,like I got a pistol shown..
3/10...eh wasent really feelin this

Homie your like my little Bro,envyin all my actions..
but you couldn't have pop on the map,even if pepsi got an atlas..*
8/10...This was ya Best Punch...Bar Nun

after Soc Owned you,it seemed now you Bitin his nuts..
you still gettin hit,after you changed names,like in enough..
4/10 ..ok closer

Ya had nice punches..some could have been re worded
Nice Multis in this..they won u the battle
nice complexity...ok structure and good wordplay
came alot harder than your comp here
7/10


Wow, ok...I seen ya drops, and I've already had alot of you
Your the reason why topical heads, should stick to topicals
7/10...Lol nice Opener

You called me out right? But what happened bitch
Half the personals were fake, and the others were wack as shit
3/10....Uh no ...this was jus 2 damn plain

Talk about ya life on RV...and to me, that shit is sad son
How could all that happen? When it's obvious you don't have one
4/10..Uh this wasent really a punch

Heard about how you got beat up, sad? nah, laughin instead
niggas in the hood got Deph on smash...when they cracked his head
3/10...Um another No
Nigga prolly is on my dick, like 'Lotty, I wanna be right there witcha'
You can tell he in my shadow, his avvy is prolly a self picture
6/10...Nice ass Closer

Yea i can tell this is Mike by his simplicity
but u had some nice punches bout 2 of em
ya multis was ok
no wordplay really....U could have elevated
ya lyrix a lil...seemed 2 me as if u were jus
talkin instead of batteling...go AFTER Deph
and not jus throwin out words

No hate here Lotty u jus simply Lost this one
5/10

*Nuff Said*
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