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Old 02-10-05, 06:40 AM   #35
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Voted For: NeptuneHurricane

aight breakdown:
Rambo
i wasn't feelin your first half of your verse, it wasn't hot.. this bar wasn't too bad tho:
Neptune is a planet and you cant be a scurry mayne/
Cause i had a impact on florida you aint no hurrycane//

also some of your lines didn't even rhyme.. you had some aight punches..

NeptuneHurricane
your opener was hot-
I Pack more Green than the Packers, my rhymes so cold you can call em lambo/*
This pussy Rambo is a hoe, he thinks his rhymes are bright stars but dont glow/

the second bar was pretty decent as well-
Let him know, cuz this battles all for show/
When you rap, it's like a time bomb, cuz sooner or later you'll realize:
You blow/

your verse seems as tho you spit audio tracks the way it flows smoothly.. you write the way you prolly spit.. but for this battle, that was not the right route to go.. the lines wit automatic, fanatic, and vatican were unnecessary.. however you had a nice finisher to end the battle.. you came harder and was consistent overall so i give the win to you.
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