man nice track son.. would of topped it off wit a bitch in the background sayin dreammmsss like singin it na'mean you should try gettin a chick to do that for you..believe me lil things like that amped the track up..but flow is real smooth i like it ...lyrics nice ish smooth as the flow you have and you kept it good lyrically for it bein a track talkin about bitches..lol thats always a plus..ya know you cant soften up like Ja on these tracks..but overall man i'll rate this a 8/10 you would get a ten if you a get bitch to sing that shit i told you be..try gettin a female to do that for you iight kid holla.. stay up and peep my DEMO'Lition thread iight 1ne

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