Voted For: Hot Sauce

i think hot sauce took this one. not because his verse was longer, but because i think he came wit more creative mettaphores in this one, and more creativitie.
FB-u had a nice verse. relatively short, compared to hot sauce, but i wasnt feelin ur overall verse. i thought it was kinda boring, and not interesting at all. i think when u text battle, u need to come harder, and more interesting. some of ur punches landed well, and seemed hard, and UNplay'd, but allota yo punches were kinda wack to me, and didnt land like i think they shouldve. u had good structure in yo verse. i didnt really see any stretched or unfinished lines, so i think u took tha stucture part of this one. yo wordplay was off in this one, and yo vocab was also off to me. i wasnt feelin ur rhyming either. i think u had too many predictable rhymes in there. on tha mettaphore part, i think u came okay on that, but not any tight shit, that aint been said before. but ur overall verse, i wasnt really feelin it. no hate tho
hot sauce- i was feelin ur overall verse. yo opener, and first couple of barz was off tha chain, i thought, but i think near tha middle of ur verse (tha main focus part), was off, and ur punches started to land incorrectly, and they seem'd a lil play'd. u did manage to pick it up near tha end tho. i wasnt feelin yo structure in this one. yo lines were too close together. yo had some hard punches, but i think yo mettas was better. (when you typin in text, you should really leave out that "*" shit, and all that xtra shit you put in there, it really fucks up yo structure, n thats a big focus in text battling), but like i said, i was feelin this overall verse, and i think u came wit it, and took this one.
overall-yall should work on some shit that i stated, but this was a one sided battle to me. i think hot took this one hands down, wit a better all around verse.


opener-hot sauce
punches-hot sauce
mettas-hot sauce
structure-flamin barz
body verse-flamin barz
creativeness-hot sauce
vocab-hot sauce
wordplay-hot sauce
multies-hot sauce
rhymin-hot sauce
closer-none
overall-hot sauce

v/hot sauce

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