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Old 02-10-05, 02:50 PM   #12
PayDay
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yeah i was feelin the whole thing...dolla you brought alot of emotion to the set...and indeph yours was the same...the verses that yall wrote were hand in hand...whent from one to the other...and it all made sense...the flow was good...but the structure was a lil off...just work on that and that will be even better...9/10
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