Thread: rhyme structure
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Old 02-10-05, 03:08 PM   #2
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yo u have the talent and the multi's but u ain't got the vocab u really good think it out more sure it rhymed but make sure u put shit in there that makes sense too so i'll give this 5/10...elevate
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