Voted For: Damian

speats had a good opener. Rhyming was a little weak but nice punch onb a personal level. After that the punches were real good and hitting home. Verse was a lot shorter than his but in my opinion more effective. The flow from line to line was real good and the there was no problems with the structure. I liked the bits about titanic and babydick. Well i liked it all but that stood out. And the close was good, nice punch hit him personally

Armada: You had some punches there that were good but generally it looked like you were just throwing in everything that came into your head. You need to take more time and care in my opinion. opener was ok, liked the bit aboutt he mad cow disease but the structure and flow of that opening 4 lines wasnt good. ya verse was too long, i read the whole thing and was left tink, "all that and no real quality lines". there was a few quality lines but too many whack ones.
Good bit: "Damian is a enviromentalist Faggot, Tryin to fuck trees
Take a look at his countrys flag representin "Maple Leafs"
But this was an obvious fake personal, apart from using his flag. Structure was off and it didnt flow too great. I think you should take ya time a bit more.
"He aint lickin one dick at a time dis fool can lick 10 wit it
Diss niggas a fuckin joke man,Armada leave you dead fam, Ima dat nigga comin for you strait outta maryland//"
-This is probaly the worst line i seen since i been on this site

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