Rastafari Walk Tall
From: East London, (Hackney) |
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IP:
Structure: Flawless
Flow: Decent
Topic: played but ok...
Vocab: Decent
Emotion: On point
Imagery: lots of
i say dope for first attempt fam...jus b more adventurous in what you write about and how you express yourself...use more metaphors, similies etc...
overall -7.5/10
Peace
THE JURY
-AC
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