Voted For: Personify

Vote: Px

I was feelin the sub-divisions in Px's drop it gave him a focus for each paragraph and the titles coveyed the themes and emotion he wanted to come through...Vocab was nice in the drop..not over-done and not too-little...the rhetorical questons worked well but got annoyin after the first 2...stuck to topic well and gave a nice lil story.overall tight drop...8.5/10 PEace

Parallel..ur drop was actually flawless...structure,vocab and flow all worked welll...just needed to be a bit more deep and go into more detail with your story and that way you can incorporate more things..and dont waste lines on stuff that doesnt further your drop..but are just there cos they sound good type thing..overall -8/10 Peace

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