1st verse, quality is bad, good flow, need to turn down the beat and up vocals a lil
lyrics... cant really tell lol

2nd verse, betta flow than u ussually have, liked it, good job wif effects and shii, maybe make ur dubs down just a tad in some spots, also beat seems a lil loud, lyrics are straight, delevery can be worked on a lil

2nd verse was way betta though overall
beat was ok, emotional shii

holla back

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