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Old 02-11-05, 02:01 PM   #8
Acuity
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When you get this loss, it will just be one of my devastating creations
Never really heard of you, but, oblivion seems to best describe your reputation
the words dnt qute rhyme...gd punch..decnt concept-7.5/10
Look kid, I could flip my record, and this you couldn’t top it, not one bit
Since you always hopping around like lil C.A.L.I., shit, go hop on his dick*
lol, gd humour, nice punch...used the bar well, gd flow -8.5/10
And I thought my drop was bad, yeah, until I looked at pictureperfect’s verse
Please, you can’t beat me, compare my punches to yours but you came worst
feeding.....decent punch,flow and vocab on point-8/10
Take a look at your punches, they’re isn’t none, that’s something you lack
This herb isn’t going to go anywhere, so I guess he’s stuck on being wack
ill wordplay, hard hitting punch, very nice flow -8.5/10
Look bitch your text is like plastic knifes kid, it never seems to penetrate
Those L’s in your battle record, is practically the only thing that elevate
hella tigh closer, concept was creative, gd wordplay,nice flow and hard punch -9.5/10

Pictureperfect: work on your structure and flow.....maybe write to a beat i dunno, ur drop jus felt disjointed and choppy...deres no point going for personals if their shit like the 1s u used man.no h8...one thing i can raise you on is ur creative punches they werent particulairly hard hittin but inventive and show potential..work on ur flow and structure and personlas and combine it wid ur creativity and ull b heavy

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