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Old 02-11-05, 02:46 PM   #6
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: Acuity

In 12lines ill blaze ur drop, which will use unlimited played rhymes
This is a toilet your verse goes plop,mine smells like roses and shines
pretty good closer, punch landed…6/10
Crimen-E is mentally deficient, never kick a spit thats lyrically tight
To rap his mind insufficient, he cant even drop a link from open mic
decent punch, nice persona to it…good flow 7/10
Kid needs to back-off, before he gets bitch slapped and looses his sight
I dont look when I jack-off, after lyrically rapin dis herb i cud cum in his eye
this punch was okay, kinda off but aight though 6/10
Who is this RV guest, whos attempting to place my rep under duress
I came wid my military uniform pressed, he turned up in his sunday dress
pretty decent punch line here, punch was on point 7/10
Needs to step back, go home and fix his horrible verse structure
Its like he's high on crack,verse full of holes, but still drives with the puncture
lol, good punch here, nice persona to it…8/10
Crimen-E at fault, Nigga thinks he's fly well her comes the air assault
I've eaten this herb, but hes undercooked, pass me the table salt....
decent closer, 6/10

Crimen-E: I don’t know what was that there though
Your structure wasn’t good, didn’t see any punches
From you, and ur flow was a little off, overall you need
To elevate way more if u want to win battle…
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