damn man. i started by reading the first few lines and wondering whether or not to read on cos it seemed whack but then i read on, soon as i got to the 4th or 5th line i started to like it.

It was cool, definately enjoyed it, i was thinking "the rhyming does seem played" but then i realised you are genius cos that exactly like you is on pills in that repect.

I liked it 8/10

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