This was a nice piece. Good concept which left it open for yous to have a bit of fun.

Indeph's verse: was dope as fuck! as we would expect from him. some great multis and a hectic selection of double rhymes, wordplay and a great flow with a nice structure.
"Honestly this Artist,will make yo face look like a picaso pic.."
This was a fucking dope line, stood out of a fancy crowd tho. Just showed the quality of your metaphors.

Hood Dawg: held his own without doubt. A nice verse with some good wordplay and multi rhymes. Good vocab, quite some anger in that i could sense.

OneStepBeyond's verse: I especially liked the first five lines or so of yours, they flowed so well and were cool. Top marks for those. The rest was cool aswell, I avnt seen any of your previous open mic work. I think by looking at this you prob drop some heavy stuff. Il look out in the future. Good structure aswel and good keeping with the topic.

dopeness 8.5/10

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