Typing as I listen: couldn't understand much of jack shit in the first verse. HARD CORE net flow in the first. Q blew bigtime on that verse and the reverb on it dud more harm than good - sounded liek it was recorded with a fisherprice mic. Come a little closer to the mic and put a sock on it for future recordings - bring up the clarity and keep the pop down. Second verse - flow is lumpy. Slow in some spots, rushes to all hell in some parts, then moderate speed - all in the same sentence. Q also sucked here. Both you guys need to invest in mic's - even if it's a cheap one - just long as it's not a computer mic. They make great hammers and paperweights - but horrible for use of an emcee in training since you don't train yourself on aspects of your voice that those cheap mic's can't pick up. Some EQing is a halfassed fix since you'd be amplifying a sound that the mic didn't pick up in the first place.

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