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43-7-33 KO's
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IP:
Voted For: *Troop*
T.R.OO.P
Alright THis Was One Sided Troop Had This Battle His Punches Where On Target And Was Hitting, His Rhyme Scheme Was There, Also Had Some Good Vocabulary, Structure Was Decent His Lines Was All Lined Up, WordPlay Nice, This Verse Was Creative, And That's What You Need For Battles These Days,Also Had Personals Which I Felt Was Hard Hitting, From My Prespective This Battle Was One Sided
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Alright Coz First Off??
Where Was Your Structure? It Was Chaotic Kid, You Need To Start Lining Your Bars Up To Match, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Totally Whacked, WordPlay Hmm, I See Some Recylced Ish In Here Man, You Need Some New Vocabulary. Coz This Is Getting Played, Alos Personals Wasn't Quite Hitting You Need To Work On That, Punches, Gosh Dawg That Needs Help Coz Not One Even Hit Troop Close Enuff To Damage, Any Way Elevate Some More Pimpin
Vote=Troop
Return The Favor Me Vs Death Only, Link In My Sig......
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