The Original Half Ass King
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IP:
Voted For: Capitol
Opener - Capitol, both were weak tho.
Closer - Capitol, although weak...Deaths was WACK!
Punches - Capitol, funny ass punches.
Personals - Tie, bpth used each others names nicely.
Metas - Tie, both had dope metas.
Multies - Capitol, and Death...using-dashes-on-words-arent-multies.
Structure - Both were bad...Deaths were worse...kid you made your text smaller and it still didnt all fit on one line in places.
Vocab - Capitol, nothing special about Deaths
Creativness - Neither, blahhh.
[b]As you can see above, Capitol took this one easy. Death, your lines were so fucking extended. Because of that you had no flow and it was more like a paragraph instead of a line. Capitol, you actually had some funny lines and nice wordplay. One more thing Death...like I said, its not considered a multi just because of your dashes you used. Stop trying so hard...kick back and just let it flow...I wanna see both of you elevate in your next battles...no hatin, just an hounest vote...payce.
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