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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP:
it was a no-show...  ...k but im gonna crit it antway cuz its nice... 
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Originally Posted by hotshh!
Take ya Cash Crop..... like Raiding Crack Spots Making Jack Pots
Invade ya Wack Block an sneak in ya crib to Break Ya LabTop (oh no!)
^^lol, nice, good flow I Demand da Mic, but we can Stand and Fight with the Hands or Knife
but do you Plan to Type Tonight?.. I'll Crush you like a Can of Sprite
^^pretty goodDamned if Im Wasted by da Man that Im Facing Damage Replace Em
dats da Ramifications... Mista you spit fire? well Damn it! Im Satan
^^decent set up...2nd line multis was creative...well doneBitch you Lame.. for Envisioned Fame, Authentiq Contradict His Name
So Switch ya Game Whats your Height? Stand Up....Ill Fix Your Frame
^^this was aight,.....
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overall ya had good content n ya ryhme scheme was consistant..
only thing i would suggest would be a lil stronger vocab, but as i see
you already wasted a decent verse.....dont stress..lol...pz..RTF...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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