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Old 02-12-05, 03:15 AM   #14
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Capitol

u got cap...hammer alrite u had good personal concepts but how u worded dem was real wack and u tried da make ya whole verse personal switch it up spit a hott punchline like ya last line....cap good verse some of ya lines b long so fix dat up u had a few nice punhclines and u switched it up instead of makin ya whole shit personal which was good...u were more consistant thru out dis battle

opener-cap
strucuture-hamm
punchlines-cap
multis-cap had a few
wordplay-cap
personals-hamm took dat by alot
finisher-hamm even tho u could of worded it betta
enjoyed-cap....overrall his verse was betta
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