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Old 02-12-05, 06:09 AM   #11
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Voted For: Ltizzle

you gon get stirred up and spit out, like sour lemonade
cause dawg your name says it all...you jus a "renegade"
infact ill impact you, you couldnt have tight flow if you was a wrench
so like untalented basketball players...
...yo crew leaves you on da bench

VS

and u know da nigga hotta dan hot
I got a lil bitty lazer but itz blowin off alot of ya top

Damn tizzle never seen you do text before, you aight but keep elevating man, you got the structure mastered but work on just dissing your opponent and not selfglorifying you got me?

Khaos please elevate son, you need to work on the structure, your verse makes me laugh

I wuz poor but i turned it 2 wealth
I let da world know i got more birdz dan da kearnal himself
^^^seriously...what on earth is this?

Overall I voted for ltizzle for better flow and structure, and most of all, better punches.

Please return the favor, drop a vote to the battle in my sig thank you.
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