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Voted For: Invektive
tight....
Dopeman....had some good wordplay and punches in there, for the most part, it was pretty hard to follow, flow wasnt really good, very choppy in some places, and structure, i dont know if there was one, but you had some nice punches/personals, the mirage one was probs your best one, but overall you came pretty weak and that limited the effect the punches/personals had.....fairly weak closer, didnt do it for me, overall, didnt really come as hard as your oppent and verse lacked complexity and thought..
Invektive....solid drop man, okay opener, second line coulda used some work......second bar was probs the weakest, had choppy flow and didnt really hit hard.....liked the 3rd bar, haha laughed at this one, hit hard, good flow to it, and the closer, solid closer, good wordplay on name and shit....overall, good punches/personals, got right to the point, flowed nicely, good vocab and wordplay, and hit harder than dopeman's verse, actually got to insulting him more and what not, good drop by both, by invektive come out on top
vote: Invektive
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