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Old 02-12-05, 05:28 PM   #38
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This battle was straight....

Marvjay-

*ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"*

^that was nice play on words and a smooth punch^
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"*

^this line was forced but still landin a quick jab ta gut!!..
-"shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"*-that was
NICE!!!!!

*she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"*

^that was BLAGGHHHHH!!!!no good at all what so evah!!^^

*yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"*

^BLAGGHHHHHHHH^

*u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"*

^^^Didnt connect..???????^^^

BlackQueen-

*He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts*

^^if its true...still wouldnt had hit hard,an it didnt really make sense^^^

*This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students*

^^^that was nice wit good multi's but really no punch..but still nice enough ta get tha point^^

*Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'*

^^That was killah..I like tha -God to get ya punches 'a-cross'*-that line was ill^^

*U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows*

^^^BLAGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!3rd grade foolishness!!^^^

*Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with*

^^^plate is what u came with....HAH!!!CONNECTED!!^^


overall-MarvJay got this because I felt his punchez out weighed blackqueens!!!

this battle couldve been stronger...but still..it is what it is!!!






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