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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
This battle was straight....
Marvjay-
*ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!....
2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards"*
^that was nice play on words and a smooth punch^
dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz
u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"*
^this line was forced but still landin a quick jab ta gut!!..
-"shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club"*-that was
NICE!!!!!
*she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak.....
believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week"*
^that was BLAGGHHHHH!!!!no good at all what so evah!!^^
*yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly.
look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me"*
^BLAGGHHHHHHHH^
*u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!....
nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe"*
^^^Didnt connect..???????^^^
BlackQueen-
*He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage
cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts*
^^if its true...still wouldnt had hit hard,an it didnt really make sense^^^
*This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements
Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students*
^^^that was nice wit good multi's but really no punch..but still nice enough ta get tha point^^
*Like atheists there’s no faith for ya.. prayers wont save you from this loss
Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross'*
^^That was killah..I like tha -God to get ya punches 'a-cross'*-that line was ill^^
*U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe
But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows*
^^^BLAGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!3rd grade foolishness!!^^^
*Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips
& u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with*
^^^plate is what u came with....HAH!!!CONNECTED!!^^
overall-MarvJay got this because I felt his punchez out weighed blackqueens!!!
this battle couldve been stronger...but still..it is what it is!!!
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