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Old 02-13-05, 12:51 AM   #9
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Voted For: Skriptz

skriptz...nice drop

I’ll destroy this hoe, & make him my Bitch of the Month
I’ll give this kid a lunch box, so he can ‘pack’ a punch
-haha solid line, nice punch...lunch box 10/10

Look, RV and I, we already know your gay
You need a spellcheck kid, cuz, you cant spell anyday
-nice play with that post, haha 10/10

Bet he thought he was on top of RV, yeah, till he fell
Thinking he getting some wins, he actually stacking more L’s
-nice personal, flowed nicely with other bars 8/10

You coming hard? These lyrics than are tighter FB’s in leotards*
You half-stupid for battling me, like decapitated retards
-think some words were outta place, but still solid, solid 8/10

overall: 36/40.....solid solid drop, loved the punches...personals gotter done, creativity was toppin it, vocab nice, nothing played, closer was weakest line, but still solid bar, this verse kicked ass, i dunno really was to criticize, maybe just put multies in, there, great spit, laughed and actually felt like i was there watching you insult this guy, haha

Pliem, i dunno man, skriptz outta your league

Dawg, you're just a prewritting faggot, I BEG you to stop
Why the fuck you need a day to check in, and 30 min to drop?
-didnt really punch him here, weak man 4/10

Yo son, i'm teaching you suttin, so please listen a sec
You the only person with 32 wins and ZERO respect
-this wasnt bad, nice personal 7/10

Give up on the net, you just got dickriders and shit dude
Cuz-I~could-get~wins-if~I-only~typed-like~this-too!
-again, weak, not really sayin much, self glorifyin, in a stupid way 3/10

Look man, i'm the better rapper that you won't get past
Cuz even the guy in ya avatar raps better than your bitch ass!
-bad end to a horrible spit, sorry dude, didnt do it for me 3/10

overall: 17/40

i dunno, didnt look like you really tried, vocab is very simple, flow and structure wasnt really there, sorry man, but you just came out weak, and against someone like skriptz, you gotta bring your top shit, na mean, just keep elevatin, try harder next time
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