Voted For: ..Lyrical..

ok, this was obvious

Lyrical...nice drop man

I can already tell, your drop will have no punches
Heard you rang the bell, I’m just following hunches
-kinda weak, but decent enough 7/10

Looka here kid, I don’t mean to shatter your dreams
Your career wasn’t meant to happen like AH teams*
-nice punch, creative, 8/10

Your just an ignorant bitch, who gets on peoples nerves
You can afford wins, your wack name is all you deserve
-haha, nice personal, had me laughing 8/10

Giving you a loss, in my view I’m glad, but yet your sad
You can’t even ‘son’ someone, even if you became a dad
-not bad, goes good with the flow 7/10

Said he’s gonna be a rapper, rappin without no damn beats
Thinkin you can spit, but you can’t be heard on the streets
-decent closer 7.5/10

overall: 37.5/50.....solid verse overall, nice play with the personals and punches, liked the ignorant bar the best, decent vocab, maybe up that a little, perfect flow, felt good on the eyes to read, keep elevatin man, solid spit, SOLID

.MixTape......eh

dont even really wanna go through it all, very hard to follow, i didnt know what you were rhyming half the time, flow was choppy as hell, no structure, all over the place, had few nice lines, gotta up the vocab alot though, add some more complexity, try flowing away from the use of "nigger", doesnt work when you use it that much,,,work on the opener and closers a bit more, first line was..weird
overall: 25/60

vote: easily goes to lyrical, nice drop man

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