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Old 02-13-05, 02:32 AM   #14
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Voted For: Skriptz

aight....decent battle...kinda close...but skriptz took this with better flow, and punches...the wordplay was good, you had good topics in there...

I’ll destroy this hoe, & make him my Bitch of the Month
I’ll give this kid a lunch box, so he can ‘pack’ a punch
(decent opener....flow good...7/10)

Look, RV and I, we already know your gay
You need a spellcheck kid, cuz, you cant spell anyday
(kinda played, but second like saved it..6/10)

Bet he thought he was on top of RV, yeah, till he fell
Thinking he getting some wins, he actually stacking more L’s
(decent...flow is good...wordplay str8...7/10)

You coming hard? These lyrics than are tighter FB’s in leotards*
You half-stupid for battling me, like decapitated retards
(decent closer....flow good...pri the best diss of the battle...8/10)

your structure was good as well skriptz...



PLEIM

Dawg, you're just a prewritting faggot, I BEG you to stop
Why the fuck you need a day to check in, and 30 min to drop?
(DECENT OPENER...FLOW GOOD...7/10)

Yo son, i'm teaching you suttin, so please listen a sec
You the only person with 32 wins and ZERO respect
(FLOW WAS GOOD...KINDA PLAYED OUT...BUT DECENT...6/10)

Give up on the net, you just got dickriders and shit dude
Cuz-I~could-get~wins-if~I-only~typed-like~this-too!
(WAEK BAR...PLAYED OUT..NOT A GOOD PUNCH..5/10)

Look man, i'm the better rapper that you won't get past
Cuz even the guy in ya avatar raps better than your bitch ass!
(WEAK CLOSER...PLAYED OUT...6/10)

YOUR VERSE WASNT BAD, IT JUST WASNT AS CREATIVE AS YOUR OPPONENTS...YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS GOOD...WHAT IT CAME DOWN TO WAS PURE SKILL...AND HE TOOK IT...

NO HATE MAYNE...

VOTE/ SKRIPTZ
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