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Old 02-13-05, 09:36 AM   #11
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Let's start with the strongest aspect of your piece: had a very emotional yet powerful vibe over it. Felt like raw spitting from the core, just what you were feeling written down. Structure wasn't that great with the short lines and such but it didn't affect the emotion and message in this drop. Insightful and self-conscious, looked within yourself...

Solid drop!

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