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Old 02-13-05, 11:06 AM   #10
Acuity
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From: East London, (Hackney)
A Walk In Darkness

IP:


A Walk In Darkness
Sound failed to resonate, all was spookily silent
The grim reaper awaits, after my death most violent
As the distorted metal entered my skin, and I fell
My soul was released from within, BOOM! came death's knell

The street landscape faded into black, my eyelids caved down
I couldn't breath, felt suffocated, as if I had drowned
I was scared by what became my surrounds, it was horrible
The fact that around me was nothing, pure darkness was terrible
Then at incredible speed, life events rushed passed my eyes fast
Childhood to now, new meaning to the phrase: "A blast from the past"

My heart cried as it started, my awakening walk in darkness
All my actions of evil, from slanging, to bullying kids in classes
My malevolent thoughts and any under-breath statement
All had been recorded by this force, forcing me to lament
Showed how a small criminal action by me had reactions
Leading to a death, or making rich the illegal ghetto factions
I was being tormented, shown how my life was wasted
I had done nothing good for others, so happiness I never tasted
As I floated through the dark transition to what lay beyond
I wondered to myself, why, I chose to live my life in wrong's
This was my judgement as I was suspended at purgatory
For a life walking in darkness..............
....................what would be the verdict of the angelic jury

Is this how it ends of everyone that has passed
As I stood in the pitch black, i took a breath andd gasped
I searched for the angels, or for the something shinig bright
Because mama always said, when your time comes follow the light
But there was nothing, because in life i ignored the angel's harks
My life had been spent in the shadows, strolling the dark
I realised I had no excuses for how in life I embarked

So this was my death experience, with hell it was met
As I floated throuth the black, my mind was filled with regret
As the darkness started to fade...it was met with heat
I was so hot, the skin began to melt on my feet
The walk came to an abrupt yet punctuating end
As the darkness faded into a blinding red


(for people who dont get it...its a story about what happens after death, someone is shot and he/she describes their transition to hell through a walk in darkness..and also they go to hell for a life spent walking in darkness)

GL DQ...

THE JURY - AC
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