check this this was a good drop. didnt show all the emotion of a custody battle but enough to get you into it. I liked goin into the kids head with his friends tellin him what he'd missed. It seems you had $1,000,000 words in their though. Like you got complex and then you'd drop back down to basic. the structure was fine.^ the ending was deep. I have a friend i known since kindergarten goin thru that divorce/custody shit right now so i know a little bit about a little bit and those are the outside emotions. Nice drop. i'm a leave you this link. you'll know what to do with it.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174352 holla at ya boy

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