Typing as I listen:

I can't answer if you elevated or not - but the flow was pretty solid. Coulda used more cadence - but that's true of nearly all the tracks I've ever heard on the net. Also, to bring your vocal clarity up - come closer to the mic, it got really clear for liek a 2 second span, then went back into the toilet. Not a bad track - but I couldn't listen to it for more than two verses (if it had a second one) out of the sheer boringness of it. Just dosen't say anything that'd keep me listening, personally. Hope this helped.

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