First of all it is a good story about real life situations that people are in, if you would have centered it, to me it would have flowed better, but its still hot
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175292
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175459
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175293

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