Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP:
Beat is OK. Sounds 80's. You need a new mic immediately. Flow was on beat for the most part - first verse was net-flow-ish in the first half. The second verse had a different flow (thankfully) and the hook was ehh okay. Nice multis in the second but flow fell apart a in some spots. Could have benefited from some trimming, like in one line you say "I bring the heat when I step on stage yo, my mic is on fire". Coulda brought that on flow by cutting it down to "Bring the heat when I'm on stage yo, mic is on fire" and it would have sounded much smoother and no one would have got any different meaning from it. Just some tricks I guess. An okay track overall - beat is proably what hurt you if anything, and that rushed-at-times flow with net flow on the first verse.
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