typing as I listen. That "bag of erb" hounds like "baguhurb" - gotta work on annunciation there. Flow on the first verse is off in 1/2 the spots. Lyrics were on point.

Second voice - DEFINITELY a computer mic, lyrics were on point, deliv was on point, lyrics were on point. All in all a great verse if not for the quality which is a damn shame. Dude got sonned by his mic.

Third verse, quality was about average. Flow was rushed in some spots and well paced in others. Lyrics were on, deliv was on - watch them doubles and adlibs, didn't line up some spots which made it hard as hell to hear and understand what was said. Pretty good verse. All in all a cool track, but I never liked this *BEAT*. Good concept to do it liek this though.

Edited "verse" to "beat".

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