Voted For: SPuL

This battle was okay... I've seen alot more better lines from you spul then this shyt..

Technical: Dude, its called stretched lines!! Learn how to not use em.. i hate readin shyt like that, its hella hard to understand the lines.. and next time have better structure.. Your punches we're really hard to catch, n wen i caught em, they still we sorta wack, so elevate on that shyt..

spul: LoL, ur verse was pretty good, very simple, but still very creative and alil originality added to it.. You should try to use vocab, but for reg. battles like dis, it really ain't that much needed, especially wen ur punches are pretty strong.. All I need to say for you is think of more punches for futre battles..

vote: spul

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