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Old 02-13-05, 10:34 PM   #50
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Originally Posted by Spawn
lmao..alright..u say i have stretched lines, read it aloud and read wit the commas, ull see da pauses.

you have ok well where does commas n stuff are at make another line it'll look betta and you structure wud look betta to n it wont be hard to read yo stuff
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