~Babylon~: first thing anyone notices about your piece, is the impressive high vocabulary which isn't always a strong aspect but in this case, I felt it was suitable.Your drop had a sort of mysterious vibe over it,confusion and complexness and such (all the things I think about when I hear the topic "in between lines").Structure was good, flow was okay and overall solid drop!

theres something I cant see, somethin that doesnt appear
something that wasnt there, thats now somethin dear
^favo lines


anxiety: everyone knows your writing style by now and I love it. You use basic vocab but still manage to express such deep things and raw emotion. This makes it very easy to read and you have written another strong piece most people on here can relate to.Structure was good and had your flow on lock,piece has an emotional yet powerful sense to it.

A line in my rap, is like a minute of my life...
A punch in my battles, is like the blade of my knife...
^tight lines and your ending was also pure dopeness

Vote goes to anxiety, ~Babylon~ also had a dope piece but was feeling anxiety's just a lil more...Nice battle!

DQ

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