Thread: Os1ris vs xcell
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Old 02-15-05, 12:17 PM   #12
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Voted For: Os1ris

Vote: Osiris

Whitewash...any votes 4 xcell in this battle r d/rides
Osiris take the double slashes of ur lines u look herbish

Xcell, don't come at me with anymore shit ill take the tech that i aim wit/
Draw a gun then chalk up the win as youre sketched on the pavement//
nice wordplay, gd flow, decent punch -8/10
These readers think ur verse is stretched depressing and basic/
So if u left the game, bitch, you'd probably bless em like mase did//
gd concept, decnt punch-7.5/10
I'ma be generic, even though i know against you that it's useless/
Shows that your girls face proves grocery bags have multiple uses//
lol,gd humour, deent diss, well set-up - 8/10
Like masterbating on John Kerry your just cumin to lose playa/
And when people call you hard they really talkin about your avatar//
meh..ok attempt at personal..-7/10[B]
Just so you know the vets'll vote for me, and i know that you knew that/
I just wrote that last line so i'd get votes from the new cats//
[B]decent closer, cocky n arrogant lol, no diss ho -7.5/10


xcell-elvate ur vocab.structure,creativity and flo..maybe write to abeat..
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