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Old 02-15-05, 02:43 PM   #14
Premanition
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Voted For: Acuity

acuity took this hands down


crime - ya structure was wack, ya flow was all over the place and you had no punches worth talkin about so basically very poor drop

ac -

Who is this RV guest, whos attempting to place my rep under duress
I came wid my military uniform pressed, he turned up in his sunday dress

^^^thats my fav line, original and funny

ur verse had gud structure and a nice flow, the punches were average really but were EASILY gud enough to win this for ya, nice shit


RTF -
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174948


thx
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