this is my verse agains da throwdest, he hasnt spit yet so Im not saying that Im better then him by posting my verse, its just my shit so ya'll could see wat Im about and give some feed back. RP

"time to get nasty on this shit, here we go.

two knocks bust down doors, cus Im a raw enemy/
Lay ur skull on the floor, just to make u 2 steps a head of me/
U dont got the heveanly energy to get the best of me/
so cough ur blood and go battle Sdizzle instead of me/
Im mix wit so many rapstyles its like Iv been spitting since the 70s/
I'll make it burn like chemistry, then drop kick ur computer screen/
spill unleaded gasoline on ur acid jeans then whach u scream/
u better have ur team vote ASAP in this bitch befor I smash ur dreams/
If I sliced 'MYSELF' in half, U still couldnt be half as mean/
I'll enter ur blood stream and travle just to get on ur nerves/
give u lacsative cus my adjectives just crushed ur verbs/
cus I pleed the 5th when I leave u wit bleeding ribs/
got U needing kits to re-stich ur bleeding lips/
so would somebody tell deepthrought that Im one of them mean rappers/
atleast befor the rest of his spleans shatters, from his stomech all the way to his keen bladder/

explanaition, Sdizzle was actually voted in the Hall of shame in Rapbattles 2004 and also reseived a presteagest award for get the worst whoring ever. Read up on it, its hilareouse. anything else u need to know, just ask."

let me get some feed back beyond the actuall battle to know wat I need to improve.