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Old 02-15-05, 03:35 PM   #15
Os1ris
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Voted For: Acuity

Eh i can only laugh at Crime-E's verse man your structure first of all is probably the thing that nobody likes and its already just makes your verse that much worse not to mention your elementary vocab and played punches, Acuity not a bad verse you had some punches i aint really liked seemed kinda forced with the links put in there not a bad way at tryin to get personals though, your best punch probably
"Crimen-E is mentally deficient, never kick a spit thats lyrically tight
To rap his mind insufficient, he cant even drop a link from open mic"
Overall Acuity took this with better structure and more up to date punches with more creativity My Vote - Acuity
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