hey i was feeling this.. my favorite parts were:

All the jealous and hate they create
Get through the journey with my faith
Heavenly gates,i cant wait
I'm in a horrible mental state as of late
seems like no times passin
ANd peopels thoughts and how i'm reacting
Go thru the doors hear them all laughing
Cuz i'm white and i enjoy the art rap
One of these days i know i'll snap
Now man lets bring um back

^^you weren't prancing around your message, you came str8 to the point but it was done in a really good way..

Grandpa cheating on my grams
Thinkin hows that in gods plans
I remember staying up and cryin
Thinkin that they were all just lyin
False engery they was supplying
Uncle shawn and my grandpa fighting
^^i liked this portion too..

i can't wait to read the rest of this piece or the part 2 of it..

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