I felt the introduction could of been stronger, but atleast u had one....


aight bro flow wasn't bad could of been better but that it seemed pretty constant... the thing that really needs work in my opinion homie is the mic presence and emotion that you are delivering throught out the track... it was kind of too laid back like if youre gonna fall asleep ... feel me??? anyway instead of that lyrical content is still pretty nice man... just need to work on your emotion


Draxe

peace

1