aight

first verse... had some tight flow, pronounciation was pretty clear, quality was nice aswell for sure, could work on mic presence, and even tho there was nice emotion he could of switched it up a little more... nevertheless allround nice verse

second verse: same as first verse, all around it was a nice verse , nice presence...

keep dropping yall... hard to critisisce something like this... nice drop, the chorus's wheren't too bad... The lyrical content overall was nice... chorus could of came harder

and yall can still lay down better quality... still good quality tho

my 2 cents bro

check: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177309

thanks

peace

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