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Old 02-15-05, 11:17 PM   #15
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Voted For: Makeveli Trained

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Aight Listen Ta Wat I Gotta Say
This Aint No Beef Or A Fight Cuz You Would Never Win Any Way ........your Lyrics Dont Make Sence
Another Fake Hustler From Tha Past Tence
{weak opener fam, there was no punch or wordplay or personal here, work on your opener for real}

Man Dont Make Me Trip
You Just Another Fuckin Fan With A Loose Ass Grip
{nothing here either too}
Cock Suckin Basket Case Momas Boy Still Suckin On Momas Tit..wat Ya Think I Couldent Tell Ya I Was Razed In Jail But I Just Got Paroll Now Im Out On Bail
{this aint a punch this is self glorifaction and i wouldnt glorif about this}
You Muthafucker S Will Never Catch Me Cuz Im To Fast For You To Bitch Ass Im A Watch You Rot In Hell
I'll Be Back .......yep For You An Ya Motha Fuckin Girfriend Too......theres No Tellin Wat Ill Do This Mabey Your Last Chance Ta Say Anything Cuz You Just
Got Screwed.................
{had no punches nor nothing at all for me to give you my vote}work on that stuff, read some battles and youll get in to it


Turn ya average drops 2 breakfast, u aint winning w/ ya played ass lines
I’ll collapse his whole spine cuz Notice just a miner threat like a lack of Coal Sites
{bad opener, didnt even rhyme, i saw where you were giong but you aint get there}
When it's trouble he runs n brags about skills he hasn't harnessed yet
So I told em ta Eat His Heart Out n tha bitch quickly Starved 2 Death
{ehh you tried with it i saw where you were giong}
You'll get tossed regardless, I promise, even if u drop ur hardest
Honestly, I'll still set this Herbicide (herb aside) like cautious Farmers
{only punch that made it in this battle but it was still weak}
Been close to a year n ya games still wack, ya girls jus ya buddy dude
Cuz tha closest ya came to havin a Date with her wuz in ya Study Group
{haha but this was a terrible punch but it made me smirk}
Your a bitch, n i swear ill expose u worse than the Clinton affair
Cuz ya punches cant even be called Misses, they not even Hittin the Air
{played as hell bro but you get my vote cuz this and the other one is the only two punches in the battle}
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