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Old 02-16-05, 01:49 AM   #31
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Spul:
ight yo man you did good on the minnor things like flow and stucture that was all tight....you did have good punchlines but like what the hell si the shit about ghost writing i know people say you got peopel writing for you but that line was dumb the closer was good but i jsut thought you didnt try hard ive seen way better then this..no hate

Technical:
ight yo you had the good punches but yo your flow was a lil bit off but i could just grab it by reading it more and the stucture was good tell towards the end, the end was horrible for stucture but i see how you had dope punches and vocab the line with hotshh that was ight but i like your opener alot..pz

Opener: Technical
Closer: Spul
punchlines: Technical
vocab: Technical
stucture: spul
flow: spul
creativty: technical
Vote: Technical
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