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Old 02-16-05, 06:23 AM   #9
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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aight man....

the beat was easy...and ya lyrics...blah..they coulda beeen betta...ya fow...u got a net flow just like ub2ez..dont worry...i used to have a net flow as well...but just put some multis up in there and make it more complex...ckuz on this beat...if u flipped multis that would make it hot right there...o yea...dont just rhyme the endin word of ya lines...ckuz somthin i heard...

Muthafucka....playing at Rucka...

what i do is make my last three words of every line rhyme...with internal rhymes as well...

so just step up ya flow...bring the lyrics up and ull be aight...
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