im peepin..

wow carsons comin wit a good flow ..i just hate ya fuckin effect on ya vocals..and i can barely hear adlibs were there any ?..but yeah take that gay effect off ya voice..
lyrics were decent but what made them good was i aint expect ya next rhyme thats good..but just take that effect off be shits horrible..

calam..
his quality is alot better...
flows real nice..
good wordplay and lyrics
and be you kilt it..
but like carson i aint hear no adlibs? yall got lay down some adlibs it makes it sound alot better..

and the lil chorus at the end sucks dick yall should take that off..

ok calam killin it again? wtf why did you cut it so short? lol you should of kept goin be..

overall nice track just work on thos things i mentioned i'd rate it a 7.5/10 due to the fact it seemed as though yall left out so much shit which shows me yall could of spent more time on it..but keep'em droppin and when yall get a chance peep my 2 threads Why I Rap So Mean and my DEMO'Lition thread well im out 1ne...

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